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Creating your own BATTLEFRONT Immersion and Background story - BATTLEFRONT II

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  • WodiQuix
    4587 posts Member
    t3hBar0n wrote: »
    I log in, I kill stuff, I log out. That is my "immersion".

    To each their own. :) But I do think it makes the experience more fun when you have someone you have created and can become attached to. In essence, your character is taking part and living the battles that you, the player, have always enjoyed watching on the big screen.
  • Webn8tr_
    3145 posts Member
    This is sooooo amazing!! I missed this!!
    Will have to start a new one now.
    Honestly, I don't have as much inspiration from this game, to create my own backstory like I did the last. Maybe if we had more new skins.. Or maybe when we get the clone skins!!!
    Will try to create something, but I am not as creative as OP.
  • WodiQuix
    4587 posts Member
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    Stormtrooper ID: FN-5739
    Homeworld: FN records, trooper 5739 (classified) - Attahox
    Species: Human
    Gender: Male
    Allegiance: First Order
    Why did you become a soldier: I was hand-picked to become a part of a cause greater than myself. The First Order is won. The "Resistance" intends on throwing the galaxy back into darkness. We must stand strong and firm to protect it.
    Did you have a family: My comrades in arms are my brothers and sisters. The First Order is where I belong, and where I have always belonged.

    Biography: Selected at birth to serve in the First Order's FN Stormtrooper Corps, 5739 never knew his real name or family. He grew up training in the Unknown Regions at a secret academy, the workings of blasters and combat tactics all he ever knew. At age five, he could completely strip down and re-assemble his F-11D blaster rifle as well as recognize and diagnose fifty types of combat injuries. At age seven, he was running live fire exercises with the other young troopers in his batch, Batch 10. 5739 would lose a close comrade he had met in his batch to a fatal chest wound during an exercise. He would lose another to drowning during a swimming exercise. He learned early to subdue his emotions, as emotions would only distract a soldier on the battlefield. The preservation and purity of the First Order was ingrained and instilled in him, as well as an intense hatred of the New Republic, the government responsible for the destruction of the beloved Empire. After graduating, 5739 would proudly don the armor of the stormtrooper, fighting in numerous skirmishes with Resistance forces, a small paramilitary splinter group of the New Republic bent on throwing the galaxy back into chaos and darkness. He would best his opponents without mercy or remorse, taking satisfaction in knowing that one more enemy of the First Order was no more. His hatred of the New Republic and the Resistance would only grow after the destruction of Starkiller Base, where much of his unit was stationed. 5739, like other First Order stormtroopers, was a skilled improviser, able to adapt quickly to the constant changes of the battlefield.
  • Kenobi_Dude
    1485 posts Member
    edited July 2018
    I think this is a pretty cool thread, but many people only care about being heroes here, so they probably wouldn’t bother having a fun backstory to the simple trooper.

    My backstory is that my name is Wooly the Wookie Warrior you all love to hate. My friends call me “3 Dubs”, “Dubs” or my friends on Tatooine and folks in the Empire called me Dubya for some reason. I’m a 3rd cousin once removed from Chewbacca and I once ate a Tauntaun all by myself. I like long walks in the Forrest of Endor and am dating a twi'lek.
  • WodiQuix
    4587 posts Member
    This one is a bit longer, but I had a lot to put in there. I had to encompass his Rebellion days and his Resistance membership. He's primarily my Resistance character, but I wanted to explain why he joined the Rebel Alliance.

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    Name: Tal Ennada
    Homeworld: Hosnian Prime
    Species: Human
    Gender: Male
    Allegiance: Rebel Alliance, Resistance
    Why did you become a soldier: I stood passively by for too long while the galaxy suffered. I was wrong in thinking I'd get by unscathed. I learned that my story of oppression was one of many. Later, when I saw evil rise again, the government I had helped create refused to recognize it for what it was.
    Did you have a family: My father was killed in a deep space accident in the Inner Rim. I was raised by my mother, Teckla Ennada, who was a florist. Luckily she was offworld when . . .

    Biography: Born on the cosmopolitan Core World of Hosnian Prime, Ennada led a modest life as a shop owner in the city of Darropolis. When the Empire came to his homeworld, Ennada kept his head low, hearing stories about people disappearing for speaking out against the new government. Although he was not overly fond of the Empire, Ennada kept his feelings to himself, intent on going on as usual, even as the city he knew transformed around him. That all changed when Ennada found himself swept up in a large crowd protesting the new policies the Imperial governor had placed on the city. Quickly, Imperial patrol airspeeders with stormtroopers arrived, and without warning, began firing blaster cannons and tear gas into the crowd. Confused and terrified, Ennada ran for cover, but was hit in the shoulder by a blaster bolt and nearly trampled. Dragged to his feet later, Ennada, along with a number of other protesters, was sent to an Imperial prison on the planet. Conditions at the prison were horrible, and Ennada soon found himself very ill. After pleading with the guards for several days, Ennada was eventually escorted roughly to the prison nurse. Upon an injection of fever reduction medicine, Ennada found himself confessing his true feelings about his captors and the Empire itself. His nurse, turning out to be a Rebel sympathizer, told Ennada she could smuggle him offworld, as she had done with other prisoners. Before the plan could be fully realized, however, the nurse was killed by a pair of stormtrooper guards, having listened in on their conversation. Having been given a data card before she died, Ennada incapacitated the guards and fled the prison, securing transport offworld. Upon viewing the data card, he discovered the name of a contact, who turned out to be a member of the Rebellion. After meeting and talking with the contact and hearing other stories like his, Ennada joined the Rebellion, becoming an infantry soldier, seeing the war to its conclusion at the Battle of Jakku. Years later, frustrated with the New Republic’s unwillingness to act against the First Order, Ennada joined many other restless veterans in the ranks of the Resistance. After the destruction of his homeworld by the First Order, Ennada’s dedication to the cause would only grow.
  • Empire_TW
    6532 posts Member
    WodiQuix wrote: »
    WodiQuix wrote: »
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    Name: Annon Annix
    Stormtrooper ID: TK-4677
    Homeworld: Uyter
    Species: Human
    Gender: Male
    Allegiance: Galactic Empire
    Why did you become a soldier: My father and uncle told me stories of the Clone Wars and what it did to those worlds and beings affected. I won't allow anything like that to happen again. The Empire is what's right for the galaxy, and I'm going to help it in any way I can.
    Did you have a family: My father, Vinis Annix, works at the Uyter Imperial Foodstuff factory, and my uncle, Vakim Annix, is a shipwright of his own yard. I never really knew my mother. She died when I was very young. Father never talked about it much, but it hurts him.

    Biography: Born on the agriworld Mid Rim planet of Uyter, Annix was the nephew of well-known Imperial shipwright Vakim Annix of Annix Shipyards, an important facility in the construction of Star Destroyers. The son of a foodstuff worker, Annix dreamed of greater ambitions, his head full of Imperial glories and triumphs told to him by his uncle. When going into Central City with his father one day, Annix encountered Imperial stormtroopers for the first time. The troopers, in their gleaming white armor and impressive formations, left an impression on the young boy. After talking with his uncle, and with his uncle’s and father’s encouragement, Annix went to study at the Imperial Academy of Uyter, intent on enlisting in the Stormtrooper Corps. Throughout his time and trials at the academy, Annix trained hard, dreaming of the day he would wear the white armor of the Empire’s most loyal peacekeepers. Graduating in the top twenty percent of his class, Annix, now TK-4677, was attached to the 83rd Legion, a unit of stormtroopers known for their bravery and discipline when in combat, serving alongside his childhood friend TK-3439, who had graduated with Annix. With his superb training and equipment, Annix was determined to show the enemies of the Empire the error of their ways.

    Here, @Empire_TW , this is my stormtrooper bio.

    Maybe all these stories can all be compiled into one story and they all encounter each other.
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    PSN: Empire_TW. Twitter: Empire_TW. Youtube: Empire_TW.
  • Hmm. This is interesting. I have done something like this before, but usually when I do it, I imagine it from the commander's perspective. I don't always give them a face, but I do imagine them sitting around a table looking at strategic maps.
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  • Laser921
    2140 posts Member
    Empire_TW wrote: »
    WodiQuix wrote: »
    WodiQuix wrote: »
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    Name: Annon Annix
    Stormtrooper ID: TK-4677
    Homeworld: Uyter
    Species: Human
    Gender: Male
    Allegiance: Galactic Empire
    Why did you become a soldier: My father and uncle told me stories of the Clone Wars and what it did to those worlds and beings affected. I won't allow anything like that to happen again. The Empire is what's right for the galaxy, and I'm going to help it in any way I can.
    Did you have a family: My father, Vinis Annix, works at the Uyter Imperial Foodstuff factory, and my uncle, Vakim Annix, is a shipwright of his own yard. I never really knew my mother. She died when I was very young. Father never talked about it much, but it hurts him.

    Biography: Born on the agriworld Mid Rim planet of Uyter, Annix was the nephew of well-known Imperial shipwright Vakim Annix of Annix Shipyards, an important facility in the construction of Star Destroyers. The son of a foodstuff worker, Annix dreamed of greater ambitions, his head full of Imperial glories and triumphs told to him by his uncle. When going into Central City with his father one day, Annix encountered Imperial stormtroopers for the first time. The troopers, in their gleaming white armor and impressive formations, left an impression on the young boy. After talking with his uncle, and with his uncle’s and father’s encouragement, Annix went to study at the Imperial Academy of Uyter, intent on enlisting in the Stormtrooper Corps. Throughout his time and trials at the academy, Annix trained hard, dreaming of the day he would wear the white armor of the Empire’s most loyal peacekeepers. Graduating in the top twenty percent of his class, Annix, now TK-4677, was attached to the 83rd Legion, a unit of stormtroopers known for their bravery and discipline when in combat, serving alongside his childhood friend TK-3439, who had graduated with Annix. With his superb training and equipment, Annix was determined to show the enemies of the Empire the error of their ways.

    Here, @Empire_TW , this is my stormtrooper bio.

    Maybe all these stories can all be compiled into one story and they all encounter each other.

    If you look back at the link I put in here, @WodiQuix and I actually did that with a good deal of characters from the last thread
    Emotion yet Peace, Ignorance yet Knowledge, Passion yet Serenity, Chaos yet Harmony, Death yet the Force
  • WodiQuix
    4587 posts Member
    Laser921 wrote: »
    Empire_TW wrote: »
    WodiQuix wrote: »
    WodiQuix wrote: »
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    Name: Annon Annix
    Stormtrooper ID: TK-4677
    Homeworld: Uyter
    Species: Human
    Gender: Male
    Allegiance: Galactic Empire
    Why did you become a soldier: My father and uncle told me stories of the Clone Wars and what it did to those worlds and beings affected. I won't allow anything like that to happen again. The Empire is what's right for the galaxy, and I'm going to help it in any way I can.
    Did you have a family: My father, Vinis Annix, works at the Uyter Imperial Foodstuff factory, and my uncle, Vakim Annix, is a shipwright of his own yard. I never really knew my mother. She died when I was very young. Father never talked about it much, but it hurts him.

    Biography: Born on the agriworld Mid Rim planet of Uyter, Annix was the nephew of well-known Imperial shipwright Vakim Annix of Annix Shipyards, an important facility in the construction of Star Destroyers. The son of a foodstuff worker, Annix dreamed of greater ambitions, his head full of Imperial glories and triumphs told to him by his uncle. When going into Central City with his father one day, Annix encountered Imperial stormtroopers for the first time. The troopers, in their gleaming white armor and impressive formations, left an impression on the young boy. After talking with his uncle, and with his uncle’s and father’s encouragement, Annix went to study at the Imperial Academy of Uyter, intent on enlisting in the Stormtrooper Corps. Throughout his time and trials at the academy, Annix trained hard, dreaming of the day he would wear the white armor of the Empire’s most loyal peacekeepers. Graduating in the top twenty percent of his class, Annix, now TK-4677, was attached to the 83rd Legion, a unit of stormtroopers known for their bravery and discipline when in combat, serving alongside his childhood friend TK-3439, who had graduated with Annix. With his superb training and equipment, Annix was determined to show the enemies of the Empire the error of their ways.

    Here, @Empire_TW , this is my stormtrooper bio.

    Maybe all these stories can all be compiled into one story and they all encounter each other.

    If you look back at the link I put in here, @WodiQuix and I actually did that with a good deal of characters from the last thread

    Yep, that's exactly how the last story started, with small status updates for characters that got longer and more detailed.
  • Liz4rD
    1126 posts Member
    It's so nice and joyful to read these stories that make Star Wars Universe live in so many forms.

    In a forum full of complaints about a game (that I REALLY LOVE EVEN WITH ITS BAD THINGS, hoping for them to be fixed) is like an oasis to find this post.

    Thank you very much to all.
  • WodiQuix
    4587 posts Member
    Liz4rD wrote: »
    It's so nice and joyful to read these stories that make Star Wars Universe live in so many forms.

    In a forum full of complaints about a game (that I REALLY LOVE EVEN WITH ITS BAD THINGS, hoping for them to be fixed) is like an oasis to find this post.

    Thank you very much to all.

    You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoy the stories! :) Feel free to come up with your own if you wish. It's really fun and gets you more immersed into the game!
  • Laser921
    2140 posts Member
    WodiQuix wrote: »
    Laser921 wrote: »
    Empire_TW wrote: »
    WodiQuix wrote: »
    WodiQuix wrote: »
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    Name: Annon Annix
    Stormtrooper ID: TK-4677
    Homeworld: Uyter
    Species: Human
    Gender: Male
    Allegiance: Galactic Empire
    Why did you become a soldier: My father and uncle told me stories of the Clone Wars and what it did to those worlds and beings affected. I won't allow anything like that to happen again. The Empire is what's right for the galaxy, and I'm going to help it in any way I can.
    Did you have a family: My father, Vinis Annix, works at the Uyter Imperial Foodstuff factory, and my uncle, Vakim Annix, is a shipwright of his own yard. I never really knew my mother. She died when I was very young. Father never talked about it much, but it hurts him.

    Biography: Born on the agriworld Mid Rim planet of Uyter, Annix was the nephew of well-known Imperial shipwright Vakim Annix of Annix Shipyards, an important facility in the construction of Star Destroyers. The son of a foodstuff worker, Annix dreamed of greater ambitions, his head full of Imperial glories and triumphs told to him by his uncle. When going into Central City with his father one day, Annix encountered Imperial stormtroopers for the first time. The troopers, in their gleaming white armor and impressive formations, left an impression on the young boy. After talking with his uncle, and with his uncle’s and father’s encouragement, Annix went to study at the Imperial Academy of Uyter, intent on enlisting in the Stormtrooper Corps. Throughout his time and trials at the academy, Annix trained hard, dreaming of the day he would wear the white armor of the Empire’s most loyal peacekeepers. Graduating in the top twenty percent of his class, Annix, now TK-4677, was attached to the 83rd Legion, a unit of stormtroopers known for their bravery and discipline when in combat, serving alongside his childhood friend TK-3439, who had graduated with Annix. With his superb training and equipment, Annix was determined to show the enemies of the Empire the error of their ways.

    Here, @Empire_TW , this is my stormtrooper bio.

    Maybe all these stories can all be compiled into one story and they all encounter each other.

    If you look back at the link I put in here, @WodiQuix and I actually did that with a good deal of characters from the last thread

    Yep, that's exactly how the last story started, with small status updates for characters that got longer and more detailed.

    And turned into a story that actually turned out quite well and would fit into the new timeline
    Emotion yet Peace, Ignorance yet Knowledge, Passion yet Serenity, Chaos yet Harmony, Death yet the Force
  • Laser921
    2140 posts Member
    edited February 17
    So for those of you who have read The Imperium War, this bio is in regards to main antagonist of that story

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    Name: Xander Verush

    Faction: Galactic Empire, Imperium, (secretly aligned with the First Order)
    Species: Human
    Gender: Male

    Xander Verush was born shortly before the Clone Wars, beyond the Outer Rim. After the rise of the Galactic Empire, he joined the ranks of the Imperial Army. While at the academy, his aptitude scores immediately qualified him to serve as a Death Trooper, elite troopers for Imperial Intelligence. Here he served with distinction, brutally enforcing the Empire's edicts and demonstrating a fierce loyalty to Emperor Palpatine. His service record was so exemplary, Palpatine himself took note after quashing a Rebel raid at the mines of Kessel, in which Xander lead a small squad to destroy a Rebel force nearly three times larger than his own. You see, Xander had, unbeknownst to himself, a powerful connection to the Force, allowing him a canny precognition and awareness of his surroundings.

    Shortly after the Battle of Scarif, Palpatine summoned Verush to a private audience. It was here that Xander's destiny would forever change; Palpatine had informed him of his tremendous talent in the Force and offered to him a deal of a lifetime, to become the Sith Apprentice of Palpatine himself. For Darth Vader, while powerful, did have limitations, limitations the powerful Verush did not have. Thus, Xander began his tutelage under Darth Sidious, earning his own Sith name, an old word meaning darkness, he would be known as Darth Pravus.

    As his apprenticeship was secret, publicly, he was granted a high position within the Inquisitorius and named the Emperor's Voice. In this capacity, he would serve as Palpatine's enforcer, much as Vader did, only to the lawless regions of the Outer Rim and beyond, to bring the light of the Empire to the dark corners of the galaxy, all the while secretly training under his Sith master. He would continue this until a small group of Rebels, including Jevin Corso, Wodi Quix, Amminius Sinan, and a young child of the Jedi, Cade Valdarin, would become thorns in his master's side. However, at the Battle of Endor, in which Luke Skywalker was to take his father's place and Xander then take his, fate took a different turn. Instead of fulfilling his destiny, he was defeated by the powerful child, Cade Valdarin, but was spared out of pity.

    After the battle Xander, along with survivors of the battle, would follow him to the unknown territory of Wild Space, where he would embrace his destiny and declare himself as the Dark Lord of the Sith. He would draw in former Imperials and Sith cultist who, after seeing his power, would see him as the true scion of the Sith, the legacy of the Empire, and the heir of Palpatine. The newly formed Imperium would grow unchecked and in secret for the next fifteen years. Fourteen years after the fall of the Empire, Pravus would reveal himself the New Republic, who by this time had demilitarized and were thus unprepared, and launch a three-and-a-half year war, "The Imperium War." He would also unveil a secret weapon found in deep space, Gorukar, an ancient Sith Space station capable of draining the Force from a world, thereby draining it of all life. However, his rival, the now full-fledged Jedi warrior, Cade Valdarin, would defeat him eighteen years after Endor at the Battle of Chandrila, fulfilling his destiny and experiencing oneness with the Force and destroying the Imperium.

    However, unknown to all, Pravus had a contingency in place in the event of his death. The First Order, another Imperial Remnant, would continue his work to destroy the New Republic.
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  • Webn8tr_
    3145 posts Member
    Working on a background for a First Order officer.
    But no way as good or creative as Laser or WodiQuix. Glad to see this back.
    Stories like this help with the immersion of the game.
    Keep up the great work!!
    Love the unique, creative stories.
  • Laser921
    2140 posts Member
    @Webn8tr_ you should look at the link I posted in the first page, its a story thats a culmination of the posts from the first thread, a complete story!
    Emotion yet Peace, Ignorance yet Knowledge, Passion yet Serenity, Chaos yet Harmony, Death yet the Force
  • Laser921
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  • Webn8tr_
    3145 posts Member
    Laser921 wrote: »
    @Webn8tr_ you should look at the link I posted in the first page, its a story thats a culmination of the posts from the first thread, a complete story!

    336 pages?!?!?
    That's amazing..
    Downloaded it to my phone.
    Will probably read it this weekend!!!
    Thank you

    You guys should write a book =)
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  • Okay, you reaaaaaally want us to read that don’t you.........?
  • WodiQuix
    4587 posts Member
    Okay, you reaaaaaally want us to read that don’t you.........?

    I think it was a mistake. He messaged me saying that it said "comment will appear when it is approved", so he said he would post it again tomorrow. I guess the forums really liked his bio! Lol.
  • WodiQuix wrote: »
    Okay, you reaaaaaally want us to read that don’t you.........?

    I think it was a mistake. He messaged me saying that it said "comment will appear when it is approved", so he said he would post it again tomorrow. I guess the forums really liked his bio! Lol.

    Yeah, you can definitely tell it was a mistake. Great bio nonetheless
  • WodiQuix
    4587 posts Member
    WodiQuix wrote: »
    Okay, you reaaaaaally want us to read that don’t you.........?

    I think it was a mistake. He messaged me saying that it said "comment will appear when it is approved", so he said he would post it again tomorrow. I guess the forums really liked his bio! Lol.

    Yeah, you can definitely tell it was a mistake. Great bio nonetheless

    Awesome! That's the main antagonist in the story @Laser921 and I created. You should do more backstories, @UrbanGlitch , I liked your first one!
  • WodiQuix wrote: »
    WodiQuix wrote: »
    Okay, you reaaaaaally want us to read that don’t you.........?

    I think it was a mistake. He messaged me saying that it said "comment will appear when it is approved", so he said he would post it again tomorrow. I guess the forums really liked his bio! Lol.

    Yeah, you can definitely tell it was a mistake. Great bio nonetheless

    Awesome! That's the main antagonist in the story @Laser921 and I created. You should do more backstories, @UrbanGlitch , I liked your first one!

    Gonna do a Clone Trooper one I think
  • WodiQuix
    4587 posts Member
    WodiQuix wrote: »
    WodiQuix wrote: »
    Okay, you reaaaaaally want us to read that don’t you.........?

    I think it was a mistake. He messaged me saying that it said "comment will appear when it is approved", so he said he would post it again tomorrow. I guess the forums really liked his bio! Lol.

    Yeah, you can definitely tell it was a mistake. Great bio nonetheless

    Awesome! That's the main antagonist in the story @Laser921 and I created. You should do more backstories, @UrbanGlitch , I liked your first one!

    Gonna do a Clone Trooper one I think

    Copy that. 442nd Siege Batallion, right? :)
  • WodiQuix wrote: »
    WodiQuix wrote: »
    WodiQuix wrote: »
    Okay, you reaaaaaally want us to read that don’t you.........?

    I think it was a mistake. He messaged me saying that it said "comment will appear when it is approved", so he said he would post it again tomorrow. I guess the forums really liked his bio! Lol.

    Yeah, you can definitely tell it was a mistake. Great bio nonetheless

    Awesome! That's the main antagonist in the story @Laser921 and I created. You should do more backstories, @UrbanGlitch , I liked your first one!

    Gonna do a Clone Trooper one I think

    Copy that. 442nd Siege Batallion, right? :)

    Hell yeah
  • WodiQuix
    4587 posts Member
    WodiQuix wrote: »
    WodiQuix wrote: »
    WodiQuix wrote: »
    Okay, you reaaaaaally want us to read that don’t you.........?

    I think it was a mistake. He messaged me saying that it said "comment will appear when it is approved", so he said he would post it again tomorrow. I guess the forums really liked his bio! Lol.

    Yeah, you can definitely tell it was a mistake. Great bio nonetheless

    Awesome! That's the main antagonist in the story @Laser921 and I created. You should do more backstories, @UrbanGlitch , I liked your first one!

    Gonna do a Clone Trooper one I think

    Copy that. 442nd Siege Batallion, right? :)

    **** yeah

    I'm a 7th Legion man, myself.
  • SWymsa
    975 posts Member
    You know that thing... when people get a life? :smiley:
  • @WodiQuix , here's my first one...

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    “Rook”


    “You’re not a pawn Seven-Eight. Think of yourself as a rook. An unbreakable battlement defending democracy against chaos…that’s what you are trooper.”

    -Rook’s commanding officer, after a particularly troubling conversation following the Battle of Murkhana.

    More self-aware than average, the Clone Trooper that would take the name “Rook”, was an eccentric sort that, when not in the din of battle, could be found in contemplation as deep as the Kamino oceans he enjoyed staring across.

    Like most clones, Rook was trained to handle a variety of weapons and equipment. He sported an anchor beard in the style of the old swashbuckling holovids he enjoyed. On the battlefield, he was prone to collecting insects. Rook was also an aspiring artist and poet.


    "Puppets" by Rook

    Metal Men, do you dream?
    In straight lines
    Puppets you seem
    Are we not also on strings?
    Skeleton Men
    To which borrowed flesh clings
    Smashed together, playthings we
    But which will break
    The rock, or the sea?


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  • WodiQuix
    4587 posts Member
    @WodiQuix , here's my first one...

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    CT-7878

    “Rook”


    “You’re not a pawn Seven-Eight. Think of yourself as a rook. An unbreakable battlement defending democracy against chaos…that’s what you are trooper.”

    -Rook’s commanding officer, after a particularly troubling conversation following the Battle of Murkhana.

    More self-aware than average, the Clone Trooper that would take the name “Rook”, was an eccentric sort that, when not in the din of battle, could be found in contemplation as deep as the Kamino oceans he enjoyed staring across.

    Like most clones, Rook was trained to handle a variety of weapons and equipment. He sported an anchor beard in the style of the old swashbuckling holovids he enjoyed. On the battlefield, he was prone to collecting insects. Rook was also an aspiring artist and poet.


    "Puppets" by Rook

    Metal Men, do you dream?
    In straight lines
    Puppets you seem
    Are we not also on strings?
    Skeleton Men
    To which borrowed flesh clings
    Smashed together, playthings we
    But which will break
    The rock, or the sea?


    That's really good, @Droids_and_Ewoks ! I love the poem and the quote. I figured I would see you on this thread some time! I'm also in the works of making a clone trooper.
  • Droids_and_Ewoks
    448 posts Member
    edited July 2018
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    B1-123

    123 was not particularly noteworthy, and was in most regards a standard battle droid. However, a malfunction (or sabotage attempt) at the droid foundry created a virus that left him and a small batch of fellow battle droids with a propensity for outbursts of obscene language, and an even more condescending attitude towards subordinate droids than usual.

    An explosion combined with mud contamination on Mimban caused minor damage to 123’s gyroscopic and auditory sensors, causing the droid to have lapses in balance and hearing. He would often respond to orders with an irritated “WHAT?!” B1-123 also had a strange urge to pet animals, including large dangerous predators.
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  • WodiQuix
    4587 posts Member
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    B1-123

    123 was not particularly noteworthy, and was in most regards a standard battle droid. However, a malfunction (or sabotage attempt) at the droid foundry created a virus that left him and a small batch of fellow battle droids with a propensity for outbursts of obscene language, and an even more condescending attitude towards subordinate droids than usual.

    An explosion combined with mud contamination on Mimban caused minor damage to 123’s gyroscopic and auditory sensors, causing the droid to have lapses in balance and hearing. He would often respond to orders with an irritated “WHAT?!” B1-123 also had a strange urge to pet animals, including large dangerous predators.

    I love this part, lol! Good bio!
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    Braken

    Homeworld: Mon Cala


    Soft spoken, yet jovial when compared with other Quarren, Braken did not intend to leave his oceanic home. Cyprin, the sister of Braken’s Mon Calamari best friend Barbus, enlisted to become part of Admiral Ackbar’s fleet. Barbus, having no less a sense of duty, but little feel for starships, left to join the Alliance infantry.

    Upon learning this, Cyprin pleaded with Braken to go with Barbus and protect him, feeling that her brother had no place in combat. Barbus would be killed in the massive Imperial raid on Yavin IV, following the destruction of the first Death Star. Braken swore to Cyprin that he would remain in the fight until the Empire was a distant memory.

    After the final defeat of the Empire, Braken returned to Mon Cala for a time. With the rise of the First Order, none other than Ackbar himself called Braken back to join the fight.

    Braken is an adept pilot, and his ferocity on the battlefront is matched only by his gentleness away from it. He is diplomatic by nature, has a soft spot for children and animals, and possesses a keen scientific mind.
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  • Laser921
    2140 posts Member
    edited September 2018
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    Emotion yet Peace, Ignorance yet Knowledge, Passion yet Serenity, Chaos yet Harmony, Death yet the Force
  • Laser921
    2140 posts Member
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    Name: Tor Ponith
    Allegiance: Rebellion/New Republic/Resistance(indirectly)

    Tor Ponith began his career as a commando in the Bothan Spynet. Here, he was no spy. No, Tor served as a commando, for the occasion where an asset needed rescuing or protection. Serving in the organization for years, by the time the Rebel Alliance was formed, he joined as part of the cooperation between the Alliance and the Spynet. Here, his already impressive service record and his leadership abilities landed him as a commanding General in the Alliance military. He would befriend several futures heroes, like Jevin Corso, Wodi Quix, and the young Jedi, Cade Valdarin. Serving from the opening Battle of Scarif to the Battle of Jakku, Ponith developed a reputation as a brilliant tactician and more importantly to his troops, he fought with them on the frontlines, like the Jedi Generals of old. This endeared him to the troops who had nothing but the upmost respect for the graying Bothan.

    After the dissolution of the Empire, Tor remained in the military of the New Republic, becoming one of the highest commanding officers in the New Republic Army. Fourteen years after the Battle of Jakku, when the group known as the Imperium revealed itself, launching the three-and-a-half year war known "The Imperium War", Tor was granted the position of High Marshal, a wartime-only rank that serves as Supreme Commander of the New Republic military, along with the position of Fleet Admiral for the navy, respectively. During this war, he would oversee the military come back from a demilitarized peacekeeping force to a powerful, adaptive, and competent force.

    Following the final battle of the war, the Battle of Chandrila, Tor would finally retire from active service, having been military for nearly three decades. However, he was unwilling to see the naivety of the Senate destroy the military force he had helped shepherd during the war against the Imperium and so, although he despised politics, he became the Chief Military Advisor to the Chancellorship and was instrumental in securing continued funding for New Republic academies and manufacturers, ensuring something remained of the powerful force he commanded.

    When the First Order, acting on the last orders of Darth Pravus of the Imperium, destroyed Hosnian Prime, Tor was not present, instead having overseen an academy graduation of the world Ganthel. Those that remained of the political infrastructure unanimously voted Tor as Interim Chancellor due to his tactical brilliance and the fact he would never put politics ahead of defense. In this role, he would coordinate with what remained of the Resistance as well as the New Republic Scouting Service, a paramilitary force created after the Imperium War to explore the now relatively safe Wild Space. He would also enact a contingency plan, for while the Senate ordered no military action against the First Order, Tor had ordered special forces groups into long-term assignments in deep space, meant as a cover to keep them hidden until the First Order inevitably attacked. Now he works with what remains of the New Republic military, the New Republic Scouting Service, and the remains of the Resistance to ensure the survival of all three groups.
    Emotion yet Peace, Ignorance yet Knowledge, Passion yet Serenity, Chaos yet Harmony, Death yet the Force
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